tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post1178443526163883151..comments2011-06-24T07:29:11.483-07:00Comments on Coconut Swamp: Story - Britta FrazierJared Scott Greenleafhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17622443267047663443noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-76470000008272050382011-05-26T02:11:22.405-07:002011-05-26T02:11:22.405-07:00Flip this page horizontally. It reads better in a ...Flip this page horizontally. It reads better in a comic if we are going from left to right (because the next page is on the right), unless you are doing a manga or something.Jared Scott Greenleafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17622443267047663443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-32463646186288587892011-05-18T16:08:21.996-07:002011-05-18T16:08:21.996-07:00If the woman is invisible why would she be wearing...If the woman is invisible why would she be wearing clothes, she can't be seen anyway? What are the materials of her clothes? can they be seen?<br /><br />Limitation- Anything that comes into contact with the woman also become invisible for an extended amount of time(ex. hour, day, month)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-78706369976799230282011-05-18T15:21:24.992-07:002011-05-18T15:21:24.992-07:00so there's a species invisible when not in wat...so there's a species invisible when not in water. i was thinking about what's required for this species to survive (what they eat, drink, etc.)<br /><br />which got me thinking of this limitation - the species is harmed when attempting to interact with the (visible) world while they are invisible.keviNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15906713241832104798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-26589175080643935062011-05-18T15:16:06.984-07:002011-05-18T15:16:06.984-07:00Since some of these people are water-dependent, th...Since some of these people are water-dependent, there could be a water/weather cycle (once a week, year, decade, etc.) that limits their appearances. <br /><br />Or... they can only bee seen during the rain, but they can only be heard during a drought, or lack of rain.apbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12727972575654138506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-22186259130023140852011-05-18T15:15:07.546-07:002011-05-18T15:15:07.546-07:00Problem: People thinks she's nuts and so she r...Problem: People thinks she's nuts and so she runs into a lot of road blocks.<br /><br />The guy can only turn himself invisible so food he eats and clothes he wears can be seen...? <br /><br />It's a Native American curse and should he ever be in salt water he'd return to normal. Perhaps she's a thief and she wants him to be her partner. However he decides he wants to be see-able and is heading towards the Gulf of Mexico and she's trying to stop him.Aileenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10761127218078199637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-52844463903741810522011-05-18T15:10:38.801-07:002011-05-18T15:10:38.801-07:00What if the invisible character is faced with the ...What if the invisible character is faced with the challenge of having to protect their home/belongings, etc. because the people think that her place is abandoned or haunted since they can't see her. Something like thatAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09368395754584019261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-20478042278511543682011-05-18T15:06:39.318-07:002011-05-18T15:06:39.318-07:00Is it magic or science and is it reversable?Is it magic or science and is it reversable?Meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068688459430645803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-76410491299765998982011-05-09T12:03:56.335-07:002011-05-09T12:03:56.335-07:00sorry to comment again, but I thought in the last ...sorry to comment again, but I thought in the last comment I was being too much of a fellow artist and less of a teacher. I still have good things to say but would like to say it in a way that explores the purpose of this assignment. In the first idea you chose a spaghetti western format, its a good idea because it allows you to reference something that is already full of many storytelling tools. The second idea is good because it allows for a type of character development approach that is both interesting and unique. You have a possible milieu, character, and idea. 3 out of 4 is pretty good, and seeing the development of your idea in this way will help you nail out the details - for example: a third idea for your story that fills the 'event' gap - not that it is absolutely necessary but at least allows you to think beyond your initial idea.Jared Scott Greenleafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17622443267047663443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8394547082365546556.post-2535577570146823342011-05-08T23:27:25.815-07:002011-05-08T23:27:25.815-07:00woah, I like that. . . water dependent but on an a...woah, I like that. . . water dependent but on an arid western planet - there's your conflict, everyones invisible all the time and the only thing to make them visible is a rare commodity. very cool idea, and I appreciate the pictures/explainations - very well done!Jared Scott Greenleafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17622443267047663443noreply@blogger.com